tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9995718.post1843364870667407562..comments2024-03-24T11:31:02.882-04:00Comments on Olman's Fifty: 20. Star King by Jack VanceOlmanFeelyushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17521657876810568251noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9995718.post-59421221857494508472013-08-26T22:06:14.463-04:002013-08-26T22:06:14.463-04:00Yes, me too. I think it's partly my fault, be...Yes, me too. I think it's partly my fault, because I tend to read quickly and not deeply. However, I can still sense when a fight scene isn't well constructed and it can put a dent in one's willing suspension of disbelief.OlmanFeelyushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17521657876810568251noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9995718.post-42804180218052846502013-08-24T16:26:25.952-04:002013-08-24T16:26:25.952-04:00Nice to hear that the action scenes are well plann...Nice to hear that the action scenes are well planned. I find I lose track of what's happening in fight scenes quite often, and then after re-reading, I don't think it's always my fault. I feel like the author sometimes hasn't visualized it well enough to articulate it understandably, or in other cases, sees it so well that he or she doesn't realize that the reader can't just automatically see it too.Kelly Robinsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01752857506190488860noreply@blogger.com